Here are the rest of my storyboards. As you can see I keep my stuff super rough. I don't like making a drawing that I'm going to get attached to, as long as it reads well enough to get the point across I'm good with.
The concept of your story is great! I love how you can feel her struggle as she tries to make her dad smile. Even though her quick costume change near the end is meant to portray a beggar, I feel like it also lends to her exhaustion. Her hair looks frazzled and so does her outfit, which makes you feel like she put a lot of effort into getting that one reaction from him in the end. Great job!
The concept of your story is great! I love how you can feel her struggle as she tries to make her dad smile. Even though her quick costume change near the end is meant to portray a beggar, I feel like it also lends to her exhaustion. Her hair looks frazzled and so does her outfit, which makes you feel like she put a lot of effort into getting that one reaction from him in the end. Great job!
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